6 killed near Cambridge on Sunday morning around 2:40 a.m. Five young adults ranging in ages from 14-21 were in one car, that smelled of alcohol, headed west on Hwy 95. The sole survivor was the 16-year-old driver, Sebrina Schumacher. The other car, headed East on Hwy 95, involved two passengers who were so badly burned that it took awhile to identify their bodies.Photo above: The 1998 Pontiac Grand Am driven by Schumacher
Photo courtesy: Minnesota State Patrol
http://www.startribune.com/local/north/92041709.html?page=1&c=y
Grade: 8/10
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• Missing the word "were" before killed.
• Missing period on Hwy.
• The E in east didn't need to be capitalized