Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Former Florida inmate gets 15 years in prison for trying to break back onto jail



25-year-old Sylvester Jiles was sentenced to 15 years in prison after trying to break into the Brevard County Jail, which violated his probation. Jiles was trialed in January for trespassing on property of the jail and resisting an officer. His reasoning for wanting to be back in jail, was the retaliation of the victims family that he accepted a manslaughter plea bargain against.

http://www.startribune.com/nation/88896947.html?elr=KArksLckD8EQDUoaEyqyP4O:DW3ckUiD3aPc:_Yyc:aUUsA
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  1. TeshaApril 4, 2010 at 3:58 PM

    Grade: 7.5
    • Should be "violated the terms of his probation."
    • Spell out all numbers (but years and addresses) at the start of a sentence.
    • Missing possessive s on victim's.
    • Don't need comma after jail
    • Against what?

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